The following sentence suffers from what major diction and style problems?

Sentence: Couples, who are in covenant marriages, provide stability for their families and

communities; it has more impact on community than anyone could ever imagine because the

covenant is the cornerstone for all relationships.

Because couples, who are in covenant marriages, provide stability for their families and communities,

it impacts the community as the cornerstone for all relationships. (X)

Passive voice and redundancy (X)

Consider the first paragraph of the essay

accurate, least redundant re-wording of the following first paragraph sentence.

Sentence: Until this day, it seals their relationship until death; therefore, the marriage covenant

produces oneness that honors God, creating a binding contract in his eyes.

Marriage, a binding contract until death, forever seals a relationship until death; this is a covenant

which honors God. (X)

In the essay,

Illustration and Classification (X)

The above essay uses which mode of writing?

Selected Answer: Argumentation (X)

In a revision of the 1

st paragraph, which is preferable and provides all the information for combining

the first two sentences?

Selected Answer: Couples should understand when they marry that entering the sacred institution

is holy (X)